Storyline Development:
- We now considered the story line to be too much like a short movie as there is not enough tension throughout the piece
- We want to make an emotional connection between Alex Youngs character and Alex Atkinsons character
- We then needed to give Alex's character a motive for leaving the house and going into the woords.
- We have more than enough footage however the footage does not convey an easy to follow story line with build ups of tension
- More footage is due to be filmed on the 19/3/12
- We need to plan what we want to film which will be done in the lesson and lunch time on the 19/3/12
- We removed clips and re-ordered the story to allow us to put in the new footage which will be filmed tomorrow
- Played around with the sound in current clips to create tension within them
Wednesday 20th March
Storyline Development:
- We have decided that Alex and Alex will now be a married couple within the story as this will create an emotional attachment between the characters and make the audience feel more sorry for both of them when Alex Young is killed
- An arguement will further promote the emotional attachment as well as give a dominant motive for Alex Young to go into the woods and then be kidnapped
- An office scene to make Alex A's character have more emotion but less outbursts of random over exaggerated rage which will also indicate his isolation as a detective
- Filming was very sucsessful and efficient making good use of the track and capturing A grade shots that will help with the narrative
- All the footage needed has been gathered including close ups of Alex A on his own to show his emotion
- It has now been completely re-ordered with the new clips insereted
- We now need to work on sound adding in diegetic noises such a phone ringing and making the clip sound more eery in order to create tension
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