- Storyline is slightly too complicated and could be hard to portray in an opening. To overcome this we have to excute shots perfectly in order to convey the correct messages to the audience.
- Crime scene replication could be challenging as props need to be accurate and realistic. To overcome this we need to pay particular attention to detail and make sure that everything in the mise-en-scene is there for a reason.
- Need to go to locations and take test shots of what we want it to look like so that we know what we want it to look like. We are going to do test shots before filming without characters.
- Musn't take the story too far in the opening so it is more enigmatic for the audience as it is only the opening of the film so we must not give too much away at the start.
- Could add different twists to the storyline such as flashbacks for the detective which will create more atmosphere and create questions for the audience that would be answered later on in the film.
Thursday, 14 February 2013
Group: The Pitch
Feedback & Narrative Revisions
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